Dog Stuck in the Car seat .
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!
The big grizzly roared with rage at Jf and Jojo. Jf is sad because the bear wanted to kill Jojo. Jojo and Jf are at the Hamilton Zoo. Now let me order KFC then go to the park Jojo said.
At the park, Jojo's music is very loud. Jf is stuck in the car seat. I will get help. I hope you are ok Jf, Jojo said.
At the police station Jojo asked a police officer for help and the police officer said yes I will help you get Jf out of the car . At the car the police officer pulled and pulled the dog out of the car .
The end .
self assessment
I'm a yellow level writer this er this means my narrative has an
Introduction problem and solution Plus great words.
Hi Tiffany
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your narrative I enjoyed reading about what happened to the poor dog. Your writing does have a clear beginning, middle and ending so what is your next goal in writing. What do you want to work on next?