Maths

 hi i hope you love  my  Maths  .

writing

 hi  i hope you love my writing .

elephant dung to paper

maori language weak

hi is  maori  language weak  and  i hope you love my reading  work  

dog stuck in the car seat

 Dog Stuck in the Car seat .

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! 

The big grizzly roared with rage at Jf and Jojo. Jf is sad because the bear wanted to kill Jojo. Jojo and Jf are at the Hamilton  Zoo.  Now let me order KFC then go to the park Jojo said. 

At the park, Jojo's music is very loud. Jf is stuck in  the car seat. I will get help. I hope you are ok Jf, Jojo said. 

 At the police station Jojo asked a police officer for help and the police officer said  yes I will help you get Jf out of the car . At the car the police officer pulled and  pulled the dog out of the car .

The end .

self assessment

I'm  a yellow  level  writer this er this means my narrative has an 

Introduction problem  and  solution   Plus  great words.