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Thursday, August 22, 2019

The planet vampire

The writing by Tiffany.


The planet vampire was far far away from earth 


The planet vampire is rad and  Black. It is big as the sun . Captain cat   were flying to vampire
Because   to save the  People before  the panet
Vampire  bewl up.
I am  Captain  Cat im Black and red eyes and CoPilot Tiffany    i have Brown hair and Hazel eyes and Navigator  casey i have Brown hair and Hazel eye. Captain  Cat and her crew pot the People on 


Image result for panet red and black
The  spaceship   flying to earth .Image result for futuristic spaceship in space

3 comments:

  1. Hi Tiffany
    I like the way you used your imagination.
    Maybe next time you could tell more about the explosion.
    I had a feeling this would be about vampires.
    From your best friend Ella

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  2. Hi Ella I like the way you comment on my blog

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