Thursday, June 13, 2019
fish sory
Tiffany Fish Story
Tom sat in a bot fising . tom fit sad . tom sid hip hip . he saw a grat white shak . tom thoughd on on on o.
Tom got auting by grat white shak .
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ReplyDeleteHi Tiffany I liked your story but you got some words wrong and the story did not make much scene next time i recommend you to use the dictionary or ask the teacher and the words you got wrong are said and more but cool story
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